five beat line

on may day this year
i responded to the correctness
of bly’s
five beat line reference
with:
‘i am: clause defective, compound sentence challenged, structure/pattern destructive, declarative burdened, coordinating conjunction traumatized, open, hyphenated ellipses, dash and dot, sick’
i needed to find
this sentence
to read and state it
again
just to confirm my
struggles
with my
formal education’s
minute-by-minute
disappearing act

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About lindalou5150

as exercise or exorcism, i write...for the eyes of others, for my eyes and heart only, for the love and the rage, i write...to release the gamut of emotion...to tell the truth and say what's often thought but not written...
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